Drabble: A Little Uneven

Genre: slice of life, humour


“Something doesn’t look right.”

The snow fort they had worked on the whole morning stood before them. His half was amazing. The walls were thick, the edges looked nice, and he even managed to make the second floor they wanted.

His friend’s half, on the other hand, was half the size, and looked like a giant lumpy marshmallow.

“You don’t say,” he said drily.

“I think it looks a little uneven,” his friend said.

Just a little?”

“Just a little.”

“I’ll do it.”



When I saw the prompt, I thought of the sentence.

“Something doesn’t look right.”

I liked how that sounded, so I wrote it down and let future me decide how to continue the story.


Posted on January 11, 2017, in Short Stories and tagged , , , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. Leave a comment.

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